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Monday, Monday.
Monday after Sunday Monday after Sunday after losing an hour Monday after Sunday after losing an hour and being busy all day Monday after Sunday after losing an hour and being busy all day and having a super busy Saturday Monday, after Sunday after losing an hour and being busy all day and having a super busy Saturday and a work bag, filled yet left untouched all weekend long. Monday after Sunday. Monday, Monday.
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Erika Victor
3/14/2022 04:43:03 am
Oh, I know that feeling! I hope your day goes better than expected. 3/14/2022 05:06:00 am
This structure is absolutely perfect! The reader's emotions built with the building structure. Have a wonderful Monday ... come what may! 3/14/2022 08:13:01 am
The format and structure is what makes this poem. The feeling of piling on one more thing, and literally, the lines get longer, really helps the reader imagine how weighed down you feel. Thank you.
I'm thinking that parents would be much happier if there were no school on the Monday after the time change. I had to get both kids out for Hebrew school yesterday morning and IT WAS TOUGH. (This morning wasn't fun, but it was way worse yesterday.)
Brian Rozinsky
3/14/2022 06:42:21 pm
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